Image from Seema Pillay
Yun to Kai kirdaar nibhaye hain zindagi ke chalte
Haan par kuch aise bhi hain jahan ab diye nahi jalte
Khushiyon ko awaaz laga k dekh liya kya naseeb hai
Ab zara dard ko pukaar k dekhen wo kitne kareeb hain
Ye hamari nawaazish hai ki hum ab nahi pukarte us khuda ko
Ki ab unse waabaastaa hi nahi jo aapke liye tabeeb hain
Suna hai aap maahir hain diye bujhane mein
To ab Bekafan hi dafna dena, kyunki
Kuch giley aise hain jinki ab shikayat hi nahi
Bas Isliye hame ab taaboot ki zarurat bhi nahi
Apne aks ko dekhkar itna andaaza lagana to seekh hi liya hai
Saath ki zaroorat to har shaks ko hoti hai
Itni khudgarz bhi nahi meri tanhaayi
Ki mile bagair hi faisala suna de
Kuch arzoo hamne akhiraat ke liye chod diye
Ki kuch ehmiyyat to hogi hamare saath ki
Aasaan to nahi tha par aasaar zaroor mile the
Ye mehez jazbaat to nahi ho sakte
Koi to wajah hogi hamari mulaqat ki
Miles to go Before I sleep 
This is amazing 😊
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Thank you Kartikeya…
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You’re welcome 🙂
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The essence of what we should see in the happenings of our lives.i love it❤️
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Exactly!
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Beautiful painting and beautiful poetry.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Even though the whole poem was wonderfully written,
‘it hadn’t been easy but it’s hopeful for sure’, I really love that line in particular ❤
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Thank you So much. Do you understand Hindi?
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Not extremely fluently but good enough for a conversation xD.
There were certain words I couldn’t understand in the hindi version so I settled with the English one instead 😜
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Ok 🙂 the tough sounding words were actually Urdu ones and i love to use urdu in my poems. But thanks for reading and providing feedback 🙂
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First of all wow.
I can’t write anything in proper English and you are writing in both English and Hindi. Just awesome.
Also this is wonderfully written. 👌🏻
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Oh who said you can’t write in English. I loved whay you wrote. Especially the painful ones. Apparently the world has become such an ironical place that humans can relate to pain more than happiness
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See, you are being too sweet. Thank you. 😊
More often than not people don’t speak of pain because we all are afraid of how the world will see us as, what the society will think of us. So I write about it whenever I can so that people can relate and come forward, if not to write at least to realise that they aren’t just alone in the journey.
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Wonderful reason to write! I usually write when i am inspired by something, someone, a place, a quote, a feeling, an emotion sometimes even dreams, not just mine but others as well and that includes day dreamers. So much inspiration around. And i just connect without notice lol and start writing.
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Thats a great thing.
That’s how I used to write as well. I guess I still do. Well that’s on another blog.
This blog is for the other things which aren’t usual and unnatural, like the pain and such stuff.
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Do share your other blog, please!
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Well that’s the thing.
I am sort of being anonymous here.
But do share your email, I could email you, if that’s okay?
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Its there on my contact us. You can use the form as well to send your blog url that way u can continue to be anonymous
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Oh sure. That sounds better.
I will email. I don’t think I can find it from the WordPress app but will send be email from my laptop. 😊
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And thank you for visiting my blog and appreciating! 🙂
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Ofcourse. You have a wonderful blog. And your writing is amazing. 👌🏻
I was just checking the other posts. 😊
Wait a second, isn’t it late to be up? 🤔
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And those are my own paintings 🙂 every single one on the blog…apne muh apni tareef 😉 so that you don’t miss that detail lol.. and no its not late, i am in a different time zone 🙂
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Arey, I was about to compliment on that as well Seema ji.
Amazing paintings. So you are extra-extra talented. Now that I have said it, I am extra jealous of your talents. 😬
Oh, I should have known. I am yet to catch up on your time zone post, I guess.
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Thank you so much, nothing to be jealous. Everyone can! trust me. I just tried and here i m
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